Minds Unbound: The Women of Project Chimera

This is my idea for a screenplay in great detail but I am not a great author. I need help with character development and am open to suggestions. This will not be your typical read. It is very objective in the way of scientific development, artificial intelligence, robotics, and bioengineering. Hope someone reads this that can help me turn this crazy idea into something more!! The e-book pages are strange but I can't figure out how to change it on here so some pages only have a paragraph but it still reads the way it was written.